The Dog Couple and Their Human
A long time ago, there lived an old dog and his wife who had
very little money and no pups to give all of their love and affection to so,
they gave all of their love to their pet human. The little human was not
spoiled and ungrateful but instead loved the old dog couple unconditionally and
followed the couple everywhere they went.
One hot
afternoon, the dog was hard at work digging in his garden with his little human
by his side. Growing tired, the old dog wiped the sweat off of his forehead
with his paw and rose to head into the house. As he was leaving the garden, he
noticed that his little human was digging at a spot on the other side of the
garden. There was nothing unusual about this as his little human loved to pick
up his toy shovel and dig but this time, the little human ran to his master and
started jumping up and down and yelling. The human kept on doing this until the
old dog followed him to the spot he was digging. The little human was so excited
that his yelling brought the little old dog’s wife out of the house. The little
human continued to dig until he dug up a small box. When the old dog grabbed
the box and opened it, he found that it was filled with gold coins. Soon, the
wealth of the little old dog couple and their incredible little human spread
around the town.
The
little old dog couple’s neighbor, the cat, grew so envious of them that he
found himself unable to eat, sleep, or think about anything else besides how to
steal the dog couple’s wealth. The cat begged the old man to let him borrow his
dear little human so that he may become rich as well. With much hesitation, the
little old dog finally agreed to lend the cat his human only if he promised to
take good care of him. As soon as the cat took the human home, he turned him
loose into his backyard. Once in the backyard, the little did nothing but run
around and play. He waited all day and all night for the dog to show him the
way to the undiscovered riches. Alas, nothing happened and the cat grew so
angry at the little human that he loaded him in his car, drove out into the
forest and pushed the little human out of his car, leaving him there to die.
The
next day, the cat realized what he had done and quickly ran to the old dog
couple’s house. Instead of telling the truth, he lied to the old couple and
said that their little human ran away. The little old dog couple was so devastated
that they wept for days and days. Weeks passed and the little old couple began
to lose all hope. One night, as the couple was sitting in their dining room
having dinner, they heard a familiar sound. They jumped up from their table and
ran outside. Running outside, they were reunited with their precious little
human and vowed to never let him leave their sight again. The cat, plagued with
guilt, fled the town and was never heard from again and everyone lived happily
ever after.
Author's Note: This story is based on the Japanese tale, The Envious Neighbor. I decided to switch the roles of the dog and the humans to make the story a little more fun. In the story, the neighbor becomes so angry with the dog that he kills him. I decided to change this part because I felt that killing the dog was a little gruesome and I wanted to make my story a little more lighthearted.
Bibliography: This story is based on the story The Envious Neighbor that is part of the Japanese Fairy Tales(Lang) written by Andrew Lang and illustrated by H.J. Ford(1901).
Okay I love how you switched around the dogs and humans. That painted the funniest picture in my head of a little human around. I didn't read this original story but I can tell I would favor your story over the original. Only thing is I would put Week 7 in your title, I'm assuming this is your week 7 storytelling post but I'm not sure. And lastly at the end when the little human is reunited with his dog owners you said puppy instead of human!
ReplyDeleteI thought that changing the story from humans to dogs was very creative and imaginative. It made me think that I was in a world ruled by dogs and that humans were their pets. I'm glad that you didn't include the part about killing the dog in your story. That would have been pretty gruesome. My only suggestion would be to add "human" into your 3rd paragraph in the sentence, "Once in the backyard, the little "human" did nothing but run around and play. I think you accidentally left the word human out of your sentence there. I can't wait to read this story again after everyone has read and commented on it and you possibly expand on the story. It was pretty easy to read. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like the perspective you added to this story. It definitely added a unique twist to the traditional story. It is definitely something humorous to picture, a dog standing on two legs working, while a human is on four legs running around and having the time of it’s life in the dirt. I also like how you changed the ending to make it less mean and a little more happy.
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